■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : A teacher's ability to relate well with his or her students is more important than the ability to give them knowledge. | |
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Among people there is an argument as to whether it is more important for teachers to relate well with their students than to make them learn. Although some people might say that since the main purpose of the education is to teach, relating with their students is not so much a positive way as negative one, as far as I know, it is the relationship with their students that achieve their real educational purpose. In this essay, I will briefly present two reasons to support my assertion.
First of all, the more relationship with their students teachers have, the more accomplishment of learning is improved. To be specific, since psychological aspects in learning have an influence on learning, if teachers have convenient relationship with them, with psychological aspects relaxed, students can show better ability of learning more than what they could do. As from my experience, when I was a high school stuent, since I had ADHD, a kind of mental disease which always distract and do not concentrate one thing, I could not help falling behind other students. However, since the students who have similiar symtoms like me were a lot, the school made a special class so that both students and teachers have relationship for psychological relax for students. As a result, most students made better grades including me.
Secondly, making a relationship with each other can improve personality. According to the Administration of Education, it is proven by the research of aptitude that the students who have relationship with their teacher have more positive thought than the students who do not have the relationship. In this case, it is likely that having a relationship with each other make sound mind.
To summarize, taking all these all factors and a reliable research into account mentioned above, we can easily reach the conclusion that only after teachers have a relationship with their students can achieve the goal of education. | |
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