■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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Some people think that the advent of computers make life more complicated since technologies using computers make more complicated devices and cause some problems such as cyber crimes. However, I strongly believe that computers provide convenience rather than troubles for industries, individual and society.
First of all, computers are especially useful in industries. After factories adopted computers for production of commodities, workers do not need to do physically demanding labors. Also, the process using computers are faster and more accurate than with hands. Moreover, when utilizing computers, companies can save resources. For example, many companies adopted telecommunication system based on the Internet. Because they do not need to travel for business meeting, they can save money and time. Therefore, computers make business more easier and convenient.
Also, computers made personal life easier and convenient. In the modern society, computers provide as much information as possible if people want through the Internet and make working process so simple. For example, in the past, students had to go to the library to get information for their reports and had to visit professors to submit their reports. In contrast, in the present, students can pile up information in front of computers and they can submit their reports via e-mail. Definitely, people can live more conveinient lives based on computers.
Moreover, the society became more convenient after the advent of computers. Thesedays, all the banks provide online services and many public services of governments are available through the Internet. Thus, people do not need to wait on a long que for these services. Also, computers provide visible and audible materials for education and special programs for diabled people. There is no doubt that society can provide better services to the public using computers.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that computers provide easier and more convenient means for life to industries, individuals, and the whole society. | |
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