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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Topic : What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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Nowdays, It is often said that there are many feathers that son or daughter should have in each culture such as good manners, taking their parents and taking them have a travel. Todays, I would like to fucus on Korean's culture that one is respected to good son or daugeter. they are supporting economy factors and often communicate with their parents
Firstly, In Korea, Taking care one's parents when they are old is very important factor that be a good things since parents should spend on much of their efforts into their children. it also means that it is very hard to live without their son or daughter's help. For example, my father is a first son in their family. So, he had many responsibilities about taking their parents. After they died, my father had taked his mother and father nevertherless he should spend a lot of money and efforts. Many people are respected for seeing this situation.
Secondly, nowdays, people have very short time with their familiy members since many of people should focus on their job. It makes them having more rare chances to communicate their parents. it brings very solitude emotion about one's parents. Furthermore, it makes very critical social problem. Foexample, chosun-ilbo which is one of the most popular news paper announced to old people's sucide rate which is very higher than any other conuntry. they wrote that reason that it is very shortage of communication with other people and their son or daughter. It means that good qualities son or daughter should have is that they should have many communication about their parents.
In shortly, good factors Korean people have is that they might have many communication with their parents and take care of their parents when they will be weaken.
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