■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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Some people say that going to college does not need because it costs a lot and people get a job late. Others, however, say that going to college could be investment for people in their future. It is because attending university is very useful for three reasons : specific and intensive learning, getting a job, and making various friends.
Most of all, people can find what they want to learn and broad that knowledge. One of the biggest purposes of the college is serving high education. Until high school, students learn many subjects whether they like them or not. After going to the university, however, they can take any classes they want to and then they can pick their majors. In that case, they can keep study deeply what they like. Since the college education teaches specific area deeply, students can increase specific knowledge and become professionals.
In college, students also can make many friends from various regions. Students usually meet only the people come from near their regions before attending colleges. In the university, on the other hand, students can meet people coming from many parts of the nation or out of the country. Until high school, I had lived a very small town, so I could not meet many people came from out of the town. However, I have met many friends from all parts of the country since I attend the college in a big city. It is interesting for me because people from different areas have unique dialects and the way of thinking. I am sure this understanding of diversity will be helpful when I enter the adult society in the future.
Furthermore, college helps students prepare a job. Since the economy is unstable in my country, getting a job is very difficult for everyone. For this reason, many companies require high educated people more and more. This situation might mean a person who wants to get a job need to attend the college to enter the company easier than others who do not go to college. Moreover, students learn specific parts of knowledge in detail which is using the company usefully. Therefore, if people learn that kind of professional knowledge in university, they can do satisfied works employing the knowledge.
To sum up, even though attending college is likely to waste money and time, it is actually the investment in the future. It is because people can broad their knowledge deeply. They also can meet many people from various reigns, and understanding this diversity will make them to adjust the society well. Lastly, college is useful to getting a job and improving their works after they enter the companies. This is because companies want high educated people and people can also learn the knowledge for their jobs. | |
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