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Should schools (university and college and high school) teach student about specific careers and a job instead of general knowledge and subjects? Would you agree and disagree?
Of utmost importance for the young people to pursue their lives with high satisfaction is the fact that they have to have good jobs and high salary, and also on the top of that satisfaction for the job shall be added for more. With following the trend that the society persuades young people to do in their universities or even high school, students have to deal with the current situation for their future lives. Also, in order to satiate the students with the corresponding educational opportunities providing, the high schools and universities shall obtain the current tendency. The following passages explore about why current education systems have to teach job skills for the specific careers and a job instead of general knowledge and subjects.
Deliberated delay for the graduation of universities is not just current fashion for the students who think that they are not really prepared to get a job because they do not have enough "SPEC." which is including TOEIC score, internship experiences, abroad trip or english study in foreign countries and etc. Also, people who already graduated but fail to get a job still study around the school library. It is no need to think deeply what makes the current situation get worse and worse. The society gets to be harder to sustain with the normal skill because the competition and also unemployment rate is too high in that the students are driven to have more and more experiences and dexterous skill with which old people have never had when they are young. In the sense of this situation, what will be the obligations for the universities and even high school. In my personal opinion, there need not to have such universities and high school which persist pristine knowloge and subjects. There shall be such kind of specialized school for that.
There is a very lament story for one guy who graduated from high quality university and get a doctoral degree in that. After he graduated from the university, the society (Korea in this passage) confronts the economy booming for IT industry. However, his major was Chinese literature. He put all his efforts on job market to get a good job, but there are only minority jobs left for him, which provides low salary and also does not need his specialities. After all, he decides to apply for a job which is a street cleaner. It is not saying here that his major is not necessary in our society. However, mirroring his life through his major is harsh to judge for the major. It may depend on his interest and preference, but if he chose the IT related major. He might have had a good chance to get a good job. After all, this story tells us which is the important matters for the students at the end. In order to avoid this kind of situation, the society and even broader the country should make a fundamental basis for the pristine subjects which can be persued by willing students for personal development and society's development as well.
Competitive seriousness in the society for the job market and broadly economy drive the fact that the school and students have to focus on the future career and job instead of general knowlege and subjects that contains pure meaning of education. Young people can not pursue their own interest by far way from the future preparation. Sadly, that's why the school has to be responsible for teaching student about specific careers and a job instead of general knowledge and subjects nowadays.