â Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. â Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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Topic :Some people prefer to have broad knowledge of many academic field, others prefer to specialize in one specific area. Which do you prefer and why?
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It is debatable whether people should broaden their knowledge in many academic area or specialize in one specific field. Some people believe in "killing two bird with one stone" is possible when studying and also they think it is more effecient. However, I firmly believe that it is hard to do several tasks in the same time and therefore, people should focus on one specific field for the following reasons.
First, when people try to handle too various areas, they cannot focus on their major. Therefore, it is hard for them to obtain profound knowledgement. To illustarate my personal example, I have been interested in several academic subjects such as architecture, economy and history. I thought that studying these various subjects help me, broaden my perspective, which extremely beneficial for my future career because I should meet many people who have different backgrounds. Therefore, I decided to triple major in architecture, economy and history. However, when I prepare final exams, I was frustrated that I had tremendously burden tasks to complete. I could not spend enough time for one specific tasks and thus, I got not desirable grade in final exam. Although I had a chance to handl several subjects, I could not gain in-depth knowledgement in one specific field.
Second, people can get better results when they concentrate specific thing. This is because people can put more time and effort into their specific field when they focus on. For example, my brother got a good job in the field of computer science after I graduated my college. He always focused on his major and spent an amount of time on his studies and projects. One of his friends gave him an advice that studying other subjects in order to broaden his perspective and personal network. However, he responsed that focusing on his major was the best way to achieve a success. His belief turned out a right decision through his successful job career and his satisfaction at his work.
To sum up, people can gain knowledge in their own field more deelpy and get a better result when they focus on and try to specilize one specific area. There reasons are why I strongly believe that concentrating is better than doing several subjects. |
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