Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
Today, thanks to the development of technologies, the world is more convinient and faster than ever. So are the styles of life, including the culinary cultures. Food has become easier and faster to prepare. However, I am seriously concerned of this "fast-eating" customs. It does no good for the health of the body as well as the mental health.
Food is vital for life. It directly effects the health and energy we need. However, the food that are easy and fast to prepare, such as hamburgers or frozen goods, are excessively high in calories and fat. That is maybe to make the best taste to satisfy our tongues, or to take the most efficient amount of energy in short time. Whether or not, those "fastfood" causes unbalanced diet, high in fat and deficit in other important nourishments.
I cannot overlook the harms of fast-eating customs does to the mental health. Knowing that a product is produced out of customer's needs, we can say that people needed fast foods. Why would people need fast or frozen food? It can be said that they do not have enough time to cook, eat and wash the dishes. One of the three basic desires of humanity, the desire to eat, is being repressed by today's brutal hectic world. Studies have shown that eating invigorates ourselves and relieves stress. The busy, fast, high calory diet would not be relevant with these advantages.
The busy world is spuring us with tight schedule and enormous pressure. As opposed to this hurrying environment, we must get more relaxation to relieve such stress and get ready for next shedule. How about preparing a nice homemade sallads for your wife this dinner? The world will seem more relieved. |
다행히 이번엔 머리가 술술 돌아가서(?) 시간에 쫓기긴 했지만 제 시간에 끝낼 수 있었네요 ㅠ
생각나는 대로 막 썼더니 문법 체크도 못하고 보캐불러리도 초딩수준 ㅠ
화끈한 첨삭 부탁드립니다. (--)(__)