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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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In this competitive society, an applicant who has many different kinds of skills are on the prior position when recruiting employees. While some asserts that people should do only what they like to do because it would help them more focus on their work and motivate them to work actively. However, I strongly believe that people sometimes ought to do the things they mind to do for the following reasons. First, various kinds of skills are required when applying for a high quality job. Second, it would be useful in unexpected situations.
To begin with, although it seems like wasting time to do uninteresting things, it would be a credit when for a person when applying for a good company. This is mainly because companies want their applicants to be talented in diverse fields. It is indispensable for those who desire to be successful by entering in a big company to manage doing what they dislike or indifferent jobs.
그냥 순서가 it is indispensable to manage even indifferent or tedious works if one wants to succeed in a big company.... For example, my cousin did never have interest in learning English but he was good at most of other subjects such as mathematics, science and history. When he was in his university, his academic performance was quite good and he did not have much worries because his major was anthropology which is not directly related to English. However, when he tried to get into a famous research team of an international company, he was required to speak English at least to communicate with other team members. Of course he was unable to participate in that project that he had dreamed for a long time. This example demonstrates that people can obtain more opportunities by doing various things even if they do not enjoy it them.
Furthermore, doing things in advance regardless of their preference would help people to prevent emergencies. To be more specific, toilsome things that people did in the past bring brought them solution in difficult situations in their future. For instance, I heard my grandmother's impressive story that she was able to save her father from sudden disease when she was at my age. Since she was 20, she had put (saved )some money into her account for any emergency although she had to work double times harder in order to keep doing it. Sometimes, she felt like she wanted to withdraw withdrawing all the deposits and to spend spending it them to buy some nice clothes likes her friends but she did not cease the unexciting and effort-needed work. Eventually, she paid the high medical expenses for her father's hospitalization and treatment when he got lung cancer. This shows that, sometimes, troublesome works can be our "Genie"(A fairy in Disney movie "Aladdin") when we are in trouble.
In conclusion, it is beneficial for people to do boring or tough things occasionally in order to become successful in this world and take precautions against bad situations that would might happen in the future. If you expect your stable and bright future, you had better balance doing enjoyable things and unpleasant things from now. ( If you would like to have a stable and bright future, you would better to balance your dislikes and likes from now on)
뭐 된다면 thing보다는 다른 단어를 쓰시는게 에세이가 더 고급스러워 보이지 않을까 싶구요,
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