■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :It is more important to use land for human needs such as farming, housing and industry than for saving endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree? | |
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There is an argument regarding how land should be used for human needs or for saving endangered animals. Some people say that economy development is most important for human life. However, I disagree on the point that saving endangered animals is more important than improve human’s facility. First, natural environment cannot recovery once it is destroyed. In addition, saving endangered species is investment for next generations.
To begin with, it is extremely difficult to recovery destroyed environment. About few decades ago, people do not considered negative effect on the natural. They think that natural resources are useful and always good for human. However, several side effects had occurred to the human. For example, People who live in a Japanese town started to die without clear reasons. At first, people can find out why people died and more and more people had a trouble in their health. Only after vast studies are conducted, they found out their water is polluted. Although they started to recovery the quality of the water, it has not recovered since the effort start in 1970s.
Moreover, the diversity of species is important for human life. There is growing number of endangered animals. At first, people tried to eliminate harmful insects. However, it turned out that the idea was idiot. For example, farmers in the past used homicide to eliminate several bugs which have a bad influence on their farm yield. After few years, they had to suffer from numerous mosquitoes because eliminated insects ate the mosquito. There is no way to control the number of mosquitoes. In this regard, various species can benefit the human life.
In conclusion, I think that protecting endangered species is more important than spending effort for human for following two reasons. First, natural environment is hard to recovery, once it was destroyed. Second, various animals can benefit for human future. | |
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