■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :It is more valuable to get advice from your peers than from those who are older than you. | |
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Among people there is an argument as to whether when making a decision, getting advice from peers is more effective than from older people. Although some people might say that considering several factors such as thought and the sense of common relationship, we can get more valuable advice from peers, as far as I know, it is the older people capable of providing real advice for us. In this essay I will briefly present two reasons to support my assertion.
First of all, since the older age people get, the more experience they have, getting advice from older people actually more instrumental. In other words, since the older people have more experiece, in case they face a problem, it is likely for them to solve the problem with ease than younger people. As from my experience, when I worked in the assembly line as an intern, I were bound to question to existing workers regarless of the workers' ager due to my ineptness at work, but at the same time, I thought that whenever I questioned to them, the answer was always different between peer workers and the workers older than me, so I applied both things to my parts before my supervisor. Consequently, the supervisor recommended that the way that older people said was correct way.
Secondly, since the relationship between peers is competitive, if peers advise to you, you will feel a kind of unpleasant. That is, you have to compete your peers including companies. Not only that, in order to promote in your company, you should have the upper position to your peers, from which getting advice from your peers is not so much reasonable way. According to the research that survey the environment of companies, 86 percent of workers feel the competition with other peers and pressure of promote, so most workers say that talking together itself is burden with each other.
To summarize, taking all these factors and a reliable research mentioned above into account, we can easily reach the conclusion that notuntil older people tell us cannot we get real advice. | |
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