In our society, an existence of a friend is the most very important thing in order to adapt well to a community well. However, not all friends are not good. Some friends influence have bad effects influences, and some friends while others help you. Even though it is wrong to judge and choose friends, there are some characteristics of good friends. Anyway, I most likely consider a nice manner as the best quality of a good friends. Also, supportive and humorous friends are good friends.
I'm I am (풀어쓰는 것이 좋아요) a shy boy and it is hard for me to make unknown new friends easily. However, I usually feel comfortable toward a polite person because generally a polite person gives me a chance to converse about myself personal things (things는 사용하지 않는게 좋아요). Therefore Then, I become familiar with that kind of person finally and become friends. Therefore, a person who has a nice manner usually replaces other people's shortcomings (이 문장은 정확히 무엇을 얘기하려는지 모르겠네요ㅠㅠ). This quality undoubtedly gives attraction to others.
Secondly, I am often rely on my friends whenever I face a difficult situation and become depressed. My friends advise me and feel have compassion with on me and whenever I get supports from my friends, I am encouraged and have gain the power to cope with my problems. Furthermore, one of my humorous friends often helps me to smile when I am depressed. Therefore, whenever I see those efforts and supports for me, I realize that they are real friends.
For these my personal reasons, I think it is a real friend is who has a nice manner and is helpful for to me. Although I do not separate my friends into good friends and bad friends, I myself think that the characteristics are still important factors (characteristics가 그래도 중요하다는 걸 말하려고 한거죠?). Anyway, I really love to be around with my friends and I also try to be a good friend.
제시된 문제를 보면 who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable 이 세가지 중에서 고르라고 한것 같은데... 그렇기 때문에 nice manner를 쓰기 보다는 두번째로 제시한 reliable로 전체 에세이를 작성해야 문제에 맞게 썼다고 할수 있겠네요... 제 능력한에서 열심히 첨삭을 해봤는데 도움이 될지 모르겠네요..ㅠㅠ 만약 제가 점수를 준다면... 문제에서 벗어났다는 것을 제외하면 6점 만점에서 한 3점정도일것 같아요. 제시한 근거에 대한 이유를 더 정확하고 자세하게 설명을 해준다면 좋을것 같아요. 열심히 하셔서 꼭 좋은 점수받길 바래요 ^^