"Getting a university education is the 'most' important factor for success in life" agree or not ? |
In many nations, a competition for entering university is getting harder and harder. Parants, especially in Korea, are now spending a big amount of money on education outside schools. Why are they spending considerable money which is thought to be excessive on their chlidren? That is because the importance of a university education for success is growing higher.
Usually, a success is related with money, and money is related with a good job which gives one an enough monthly pay. A university education helps people to get jobs that are though to be better than other jobs. For example, doctors, lawyers, and politicians are socially respected and most people want to have those kinds of jobs. All the mentioned jobs needs a professional education. Everyone knows that a person who only graduated from a high school can not get the jobs. In fact, they may be able to get the jobs, but they would need to exert much more effort than someone who graduated university. The more respectable the job is, the more specialized knowledge the job requires.
People who made a conspicuous success are different in their behavior of managing their time. It is often said that time is priceless, and worth more than anything. Usually, people who attended a university are better at making impact with their down time than those who did not. At least, they know more about how to use it more effectively, no matter they spend their time efficiently or not. Why? Because they have to choose which classes they will study themselves, and also, often have much more chances to choose between two choices in university than when they were a high school student. High schools do not let student select what to study. At some high schools, students may choose what to study, but only in more limited range in comparison with universities.
To sum up, time and respectable jobs are, no one can doubt this, related with success. The two factors are more likely to appear to those people who are more educated than a high school education. No one can easily say a university education is the 'most' important factor for sucess. However, it is agreeable that a university educations is one of the most important factors. |
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