overpopulation |
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Hello everyone, From now on I begin to talk about overpopulation. First of all, we have to know what is overpopulation. Overpopulation means that such large number of people are trying to make a living in a given area of the land that on the average none of them live as well as they could if it were not so crowded. The industrial revolution, the development of science and technology industrial development and also the development of medical technology and treatment technology development is going to improve as the population of oversupply. In most countries of the world the population is increasing alarmingly. This is especially true in poor, undeveloped countries. Overpopulation causes a considerable number of problems. Overpopulation has many problems. In poor countries it is hard to provide enough food to feed even the present number of people. In addition, education to limit the number of children per family is not always successful, Poorer countries usually have a lot of unemployment too, and an increase in population simply makes the situation worse.The environment also suffers when there are too many people living on the land. In rich, industrialised and developing countries it is very difficult for governments to provide effective public services in overcrowded cities. Moreover, there is usually a great deal more crime, which is often due to high rates of unemployment. Further large increases in population only cause more overcrowding, unemployment and crime. In addition, Overpopulation helps cause hosing problem, global warming and the extinction of animals and plantsand the disappearance of forests, wetlands, and other important habitats.. There are some solutions which we can solve these problems. Firstly, we should notice what the real problems of overpopulation are in our society and the government should make some regulation to reduce the number of population. Secondly, every woman who is pregnant, but who does not want to give birth, should be allowed by law to have an abortion. In china, they are already started these policy named "one -child policy" As soon as possible similar policies might also be necessary in other crowded nations such as India, for example. Finally, we We are polluting the environment, recycling and public transportation in order to prevent such efforts must be made. As discussed above, we are now having serious problems in this society and there are many other side effects of overpopulation as well. If the population explosion continues, many people will die of starvation in poor countries, and life in the cities, even in affluent nations, will become increasingly difficult.In my opinion, I insist that we can solve this problems with doing from small solution which we easily can do such as do not waste rubbish to big solution which is protecting the environment. In addition, we have to follow the government when they make some solution to release the overpopulation. |