■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. | |
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Among people there is an ongoing argument as to whether the more experiences that seem difficult you can deal, the more precious lessons you can have in the future. Although some people might say that in case you always make an effort to try most difficult things even if it might helpful to your lives, trying to experience most things is likely to cause negative effects rather than positive effects, as far as I know, by experiencing most things with risks or difficulties, as time passes by, you can get a precious and valuable lessons in the future.
First of all, not until you try difficult experiences can you get nothing. To be specific, by trying new expriences with risks, you can achieve sincere lessons. As from my exprience, when I was an university student, I had a tendency to do everything which I try ever before. However, in the senior, I had to submit the graduation thesis which I never experience, so I was so embarrasing that I could not submit the thesis in the deadline. In this case, if I had an experience that I dealed with the difficult thing, I could not have submitted the thesis out of deadline.
Secondly, in the modern and fast-paced society, it is likely for us to face the difficult things, in this case, if it were not for the experiece, you will feel frustrating and embarrasing. According to the Education Institution, it is proven that the children who have the exprience doing the difficult matter will not bog down the frustrating and embarrasing in the future.
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