I disagree that young people should have the ability to plan and organize as modern life has become complex because of computer and deep knowledge people.
To begin with, nowadays, the world has been changed by people in seconds. People want to be more comfortable and have easy life. At this time, young people do not have to make plan and organize. It seems that modern life is complex, but this reason is from people's idea to make life easygoing. Because of high developed computer, we can make plan anywhere and organize. Young people just let computer do. That is the goal for developing technology. For example, by using special program of daily plan maker, I am able to reduce my time to organize weekly plan such as date, class, and test date. We have good life friend who is computer. Young people are freely use technology than old people, so they can save their gold time. Life is so short and time is fast. I believe that we do not have to spend time to schedule.
Second, Even though modern life is busy, young people get advice to make plan and organize from old people and netizen,who use internet. As you know, even if you do not know about some information, you can get clear and vast information from internet and netizen. People communicate though internet and give you advise. Therefore, young people do not have to have ability to plan and organize. People who have experiences will help you to live your life easily. They will give you rich advise from their experience.
In conclusion, I believe that people in the high developed society do not need to have ability to plan and organize because computer and deep knowledge people form internet will help them. They even can plan and organize for you.
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