▶ Your Answer : Some
people think that parents should express their disapproval toward the teachers
of their children when they are not satisfied with teacher`s way of educating,
while the others believe not. As far as I am concerned, it would be better to frankly
express parent`s opinion to teachers for parents to frankly express their opinion to teachers. I feel this way for a couple of reasons.
To
begin with, teacher`s teaching style is not always correct. Generally speaking,
teaching style might not go on well with some of the children. Eventually, children
can get the bad result, especially the grades on the reporting card. Almost
every parent does not want this situation to happen, so to prevent such a
result, expressing opinion is necessary. For example, when I was in elementary
school, my teacher gave class students a lot of free time, almost everyday. Of
course, the grades of the students in the class were terrible. Therefore, the
parents of the children in the class were unsatisfied with the teaching style,
so they proposed significant change in education for teacher, with all parents gathered
together. After that day, teacher dramatically altered his class and the
students achieved improved scores in the test at the end of the semester. From
the case of my childhood, expressing disapproval to teachers is essential in
some kind of situation, specially in the case of unsatisfactory. (예시가 좀 극단 적으로 간거 같아요. 극단 적인 예시보다 좀 더 상황에 맞는 예시를 서술하시는게 더 좋을 거 같아요)
Moreover,
parents have rights to request certain change to teachers, and teachers must receive
complaints from parents. Frankly, children are one of the most important factors
in parent`s life. Teachers are in charge of their children, so parents must be extremely
concerned about the treatment and the sort of education their sons or daughters
receive from the school. Therefore, if parents feel discontent or questionable
point from teachers, immediate feedback is required for adequate education in
the class. If they just keep quiet for inappropriate teaching style in the
school, no one would take responsibility for terrible outcome their children might
get. In addition, no teacher will refuse to get comments from his or her
student`s parents because they might be glad for some kind of feedback they
get, which they did not know before. Hence, certain communication must be made
between parents and teachers to improve the way the teachers are teaching. (teacher에 대해서 단수로 쓸 지 복수 로 쓸지 에 대하여서 명확하게 명시 하시길 바랍니다)
As
I started above, it has clear advantages to state unsatisfactory points in
teachers by parents. This is due to the fact that teachers might be wrong and
also parents and teachers must communicate to make better class. Fair:17~23 점수: 23 첫 번째 바디에서는 예시가 극단적이였습니다. 좀 더 구체적으로 설명하셔야 할 거 같아요 어떻게 교육을 했길레 많은 학부모들이 항의를 했는지 에 대한. 두 번째 바디에서는 단수 복수 부분에 대하여서 명확하게 하시길 바랍니다. 약간의 문법적 오류들도 있습니다. 이것 이외에는 문제되는 게 없습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |