▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that the rescuing reptiles by relocating them are not a viable method. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point. First, the professor contends that creating habitats and increasing capacity can be effective. The case of the UK was given as an example. There were not pre-occupied areas by any other species so new lizards did not have to compete with one another. As a result, the number of lizards increased. This casts doubt on the reading passage's assertion that relocating lizards can lead to overpopulation and severe competition. Next, the professor argues that proper procedures could prevent diseases from spreading. Separating population can obstruct the spread of pathogens. In addition, by visiting relocating areas regularly and removing the infected one, it can be possible to stop the spread. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that the methods can result in the diffusion of diseases due to the lack of resistance to the pathogens. Finally, the professor insists that the problem caused by capturing lizards can be solved by the basic way. Water in the bucket trap can prevent the creatures from being dehydrated and the moss would allow lizards to hide from predators. This counters the reading passage's claim that during the capturing lizards they can be injured and killed due to the lack of access to water and exposure to the predators.
예상 점수: 27-30 총평: 구조도 좋고 문법이나 내용상 문제가 없이 잘 써진 에세이입니다. 간결하게 에세이의 핵심과 강의의 핷심을 비교해주신 것도 좋은 것 같아요. 수고 많으셨습니다. |