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The Internet provides us access to a huge quantity of information on us with access various subjects. It’s also very important in terms of info-tech, media etc.
However, there are many problems that followed the benefits as well. follow The Internet not only has useful and educational information, but also ->The internet has not only useful ~ useless and somewhat harmful information as well. For instance, we get to
see tons of advertisement online and get tons of spam mails. We
occasionally want neither of them. However, we see them because they occasionally는 빼는게 좋지 않을까요? we have no choice but to see~ are just there; it’s just the way it is. In exchange for access to a piece of
information we actually want, we are exposed to useless and unwanted
information too. Also, the Internet can affect pre-teens and teenagers in
some bad ways. For one thing, it provides them with adult materials such ->they are exposed to adult~ as pornography or R-rated materials such as violent movies. Easy access such as 두번나왔네요. to information means people can access to any information. The Internet We are exposed to the many things ~ is a good way to be exposed to many things which include unwanted or
unsuitable things as well.
On the other hand, the Internet is a good way to transfer files, and
it’s causing another problem. We are supposed to buy albums to acquire
songs, but most people just download them online. The Internet is also a
place where people can exchange illegal files with no or minimum
restriction. So-called P2P-Peer to Peer-is a big problem for song writers,
movie makers etc. Once a file gets out, there is no way it can be
destroyed completely; people duplicate and share the files. The speed of
the Internet is so fast and there are numerous users. As a result, the files
spread through online just like fire on a dry forest on a windy day.
The development of Internet has given us so many benefits, but this
development was not all beneficial. As we gained advantages, such
problems followed along with the advantages. I think the problems are
quite serious, and I believe that people, we, have to work on those to take
the Internet into another level so that it’ll become a safer and more useful
source for everyone.
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