Young people nowadays do not help their communities. Agree/Disagree |
Some people say that since youngsters nowadays are selfish, they do not work for their communities. However I agree that young people have a positive effect on their communities for two reasons. First, they are positive and self-sacrificing. Second, they participate in social activity more than the past.
Above all, young people are full of activities. Although they are partially seem to be individualistic and do not aid their communities, their positive behavior even help their country. A few years ago, one Korean student studied abroad in Japan. One day, when he was in station in order to went to his dormitory, he saw that one person fell down to the railroad. In spite of a train come to the railroad, he jumped into the track to save the person. Unfortunately, although the person who fell down on the track survived, the korean student was killed by the train. If he was egoistic, he would have seen the person without doing anything. After he died, a relationship between Japan and Korea improved and reception of Korean who were lived in Japan was better than the past. This demonstrates that youngster's self-sacrificing behavior has a positive impact on all over the country.
Besides, a rate of participation in social activity augments more and more. With the development of the internet, youngsters tend to active in cyber space. However this method is bveing a medium of conneting to social issue. This year, in Korea, an accident of oil outflow has broken. Since it was the worst accident historically, environmental pollution was serious. Immediately, young people encouraged people to purify the polluted area, then many people began to go to the region. Reportedly, youngsters' paticipation was more than any others and they were willing to work hard. I was also took part in the operation for a week, delaying my personal work. Surprisingly, many of young people stayed and worked in the area more than two weeks. This shows that youngsters contribute to many part of communities.
In conclusion, I agree that nowadays young people assist their communities in many ways for the reasons that i have mentioned above.
한글로 먼저 브레인스토밍을 하려고 해도...잘 못쓰겠구요.. 모범 에세이를 다 외우려고 해도..시간이 너무 많이 걸리고 또 그렇다고 외우더라도 그 관련 주제가 아니면 쓸수도 없구요..-_-;;
고득점 자 분들은 라이륑 공부 어떻게 하세요~?
그냥 모범 에세이 계속 읽고 자기가 쓰는게 가장 빠른가요~?
모범 에세이를 그냥 외우지 않고 읽으면서 좋은 표현만 자기것으로 만드는게 좋은 방법일까요~?
절 구원해주세요...ㅜ.ㅜ....
시간이 얼마 없는데....되는게 하나도 없네요..... |