■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
|
Topic :Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that would destroy the friendship | |
|
Many people agree that not only making true friends but also maintaining friendship is difficult. Once people make a friend, they try to share their time to make intimate relationship and sometimes give friend who has a trouble some helps. In his side, in order to solve problems, one of the best ways will be to get advise from his friend because getting advise in itself is good resolution not to repeat the same faults and his friends who are similar age group will understand more accurately their friend’s hurt.
Friends’ helps could be good a preventive measure not to make the same mistakes again. Since friends’ views for some occasions is more objective, this make people’ errors be lessen. These views make people get strait analysis of problems and help to find out proper answers. If they are reluctant to give a help to rescue their friend out of dump due to anxiety from negative relationship after helps, the friend could not realize where his mistakes are from. For example, I was not good at study in math and was very self-confident student. If my friend were worried about whether his help to support my study made our friendship be weakened and did nothing, I could not pass the final exam and failed to enter a university at that time.
On top of that, friend can understand the similar age group more accurately and their advice could be most effective way to solve problems. Parents and teachers are also good advisers. However, because they are older and have prejudice for younger ages, they can not but have limitation to approach student’s problem. Recent interesting news exemplify the similar age group’ effective activities. Government established the juvenile’ department to deal wit the age’s problems and employ the similar age’s young people because government believe that most influential and effective people to understand their intention are “people in their group”. Young people’s concerns such as study, jobs and relationship between boy and girl friend are expressed more honestly their friends in contrast to their parents or teachers.
결론은 쩝... | |
챔프스터디 ID(입력시 Writing첨삭 50% 할인 쿠폰 제공) :