It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city |
A life in a countryside has both advantages and disadvantages compare to a life in a big city. Living in a countryside where not as much polution exist is always good for children's health, and hand-on experience with mother nature can be a good teaching method, however, it also has disadvantages such as inconvinience in many of cultural activities that city life can bring such as theaters and concerts, and also job opportunities. In the consideration of all these, I belive that living in a countrysie is better for children than living in a city.
First reason that I believe living in a countryside is better is that being close to nature is an experience you can not trade for anyting. As a result of the internet technology, there are not as much gaps between a countryside and a big city as far as new information, trend and technologies go, but there is certainly something that internet can bring forth such as activites that you can only do in countryside comfort of nature it brings.
Second reason that I would prefer a countryside over a city is that in the society where diversity is being emphasized, it would be really good for children to have experiences both in a city and countryiside. However, it is appropriate to say cities have more job and education opportunities, and it is likely that a child will go off to a city to acquire these opportunities as he/she grow up. Therefore, it would make more sense for a child to live in a countryside when he/she does not absolutley have to live in a city.
In conclusions, because of the unique experience that being close with nature can bring and childhood being the almost last period of time to live in a countryside, I believe a countryside is better to live than a city for children.
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