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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :선생님의 역할이 학생들과 잘 지내는 것이냐 지식전달이니??? | |
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The main role of teachers has long been a controversy among many people, and it is often said that a teacher’s ability to relate(get along) well with students is more important than the ability to give knowledge. However, I am very against of this idea because the primary role of teacher is giving students academic knowledge and skills needed after graduation, and too friendly teachers can harm the class atmosphere.
To begin with, the essential duty of teachers is bestowing student valuable skills that will be required when they find jobs in the future. As our society develops with a very fast pace, the level of requirements for jobs is also gradually increasing. Therefore, students need more knowledge and skills in order to prepare for their future career. In my case, when I was a high-school student, students had difficulties listening to the lectures. It is because that most teachers did not tend to be humorous and only tried to make us concentrate on those boring classes, although their ability to give us knowledge was great. At that time, almost all of us used to complain for the class. However, as we got successful jobs, we automatically acknowledged that it was thanks to teachers’ great effort and their academical knowledge.
In addition, maintaining the proper class atmosphere helps students learn better(more effectively) . Too convenient relationship between a teacher and a student can damage the academic atmosphere of the class. If teachers let their students act freely during the class, those students will tend to overlook the class and sometimes they will even disrespect teachers. For instance, when I was in elementary school, our homeroom class teacher did not restrain us and often played with us and gave us funny stories during the class. This resulted in the negligent attitude of students towards the class. Thus, the teacher failed to maintain control over the classroom. Subsequently, our grades were getting worse and worse.
마지막에 그래서, 선생님들이 학생들과 잘 어울리는건 절대 우리에게 도움이되지않았다...
뭐이렇게 한문장이나마 마무리 지으셔도 좋을것같구요
In a nutshell, I firmly believe that teachers’ most important role is giving students academic knowledge and skills rather than keeping friendly connection with students for the reasons that I have mentioned above. It is beneficial for both teachers and students to get along well with each other. However, trade of knowledge and skills should become the prerequisite component for students’ future.
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