■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Q: Knowledge from study is more important than creativity to succeed. | |
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Knowledge from schools is definitely important to know how to live and what to do for success. Observing successful people, we could notice some similar points. There were great efforts to get good grade and knowledge from study to approach their successful life’s goals more quickly. However, the most significant factor to success was creativity when I reviewed their lives’ stories because it brought many brilliant ideas and considered a good talent to be good artists.
Firstly, creativity stimulates people to have more unique ideas comparing to other people. The people who are more creative let themselves seek to find out more novel answers; and, do not like to adapt existing manners to solve problems. It is also clear that knowledge from study could give proper answers to solve problems. However, those are from established experiences or knowledge, and there might be some limitations to apply to the current society in terms of preparing unexpected and abrupt changes. Hence, many people and companies consider good ideas from creativity as sort of ability to deal with unexpected occasions. For example, in order to extract employees’ ideas which are useful to develop their products or reduce an operation cost, companies use various ways such as brain storming seminar and events making people sustain good feeling to stimulate their creativities, and want to get satisfactory outcomes. It is natural that those who can offer adequate answers for each problem will get more chances to be promoted.
On top of that, creativity is helpful to be a good artist because artists use their creative imagination to make their works. In addition, many works are evaluated by how they express their thought in aspect of creation. If their works are remained without any improvement or differences in comparison with older pieces, they can get higher reputation. The more creative they are, the better their works’ qualities are regardless of the level of knowledge. For example, a great artist, Mr. Jang SB didn’t take any lessons from schools, but was also poor at handling the brush stroke. Despite of these shortcomings, he becomes a influential and genuine artist in Korea because he didn’t adhere to express in originated way to draw picture instead has used astonishing way: it’s his Hands. Unimaginable his brush makes him most genius and famous painter in modern Korean painting history. This illustrates why artists develop and consider their creative imagination preciously.
All things into account, even though normal education and the knowledge from the procedure are important factors to live, more significant is the sense of creation. Ideas from creative thought make people and companies hold good chances to succeed. Additionally, in art field, people consider creativities as key disposition to be a great master. | |
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