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There might be some people who believe that recommendation from friends and information from magazines are important when they are buying buy new products. However, I personally think that review from online magazine is the most important factor for purchasing products for following two reasons. First, recommendation from friends and information from magazines are less reliable than review from online communities. Second, referring to reviews from online communities is very convenient and systematic.
To begin with, review from online communities is very reliable factor when people make a purchasing decision. While magazine and friends’ opinion are biased and subjective, in the online communities, there is a bunch of information about products written by diverse purchasers, which is quite objective. Let me bring up my personal story as an example. I once had bought a DVD player refer to regarding with the review from electronics magazine, however the player malfunctioned frequently. Surprisingly, the magazine was for an electronics company. I have rapidly refunded the DVD player, and repurchased another DVD player after searching the internet and referring to online reviews. Without them, I could not have been satisfied with my purchasing. 불필요한 곳에 중점을 너무 두는 것 같습니다. 본인의 에세이에서 말하려고 하는 것은 온라인 리뷰가 좋다는 것인데 좀 더 예시에서는 온라인 리뷰가 좋은 것을 부각할 수 있는 설명을 더 하시는 것이 더 좋을 거 같습니다.
Second, it is very convenient and systematic that referring to when referring reviews from online communities. Thanks to development of the internet, people can easily access to other people’s opinions and write their practical reviews anytime and anywhere. Even some people upload product’s pictures they bought. Moreover, there is systematic rating system such as Star Rating System, which has many kinds of categories (e.g. weight, color, and texture) to explain their opinion about products by coloring stars. According to statistics done by National Consumer Institute, over 80% of consumers have referred to online reviews to make purchasing plan. This clearly shows that reviews from online communities have had a great impact on purchasing.
In conclusion, review from online communities not only is reliable information in terms of its objectiveness but also convenient and systematic. In this regard, I firmly believe that online reviews have the greatest impact on people’s major purchase. Fair: 17~23 점수: 20 일단 제가 이 에세이를 읽어나가면서 느낀 것은 온라인 리뷰에 대한 장점은 정확하게 뭐지? 라는 생각을 들게 하는 에세이였습니다. 이 뜻은 뭐냐면 각 바디의 이유나 예시들이 온라인 리뷰에 장점에 대한 설명을 하는 것이 아니라 다른 표면적인 부분에 너무 중점을 두 고 있습니다. 주제에 맞게 설명을 하는 것이 독립형 에세이에서 가장 중요합니다. 앞으로 주의 하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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