▶ Your Answer : Some people think that in order to attract good students, the school should invest money on social activities. On the other hand, in my opinion, I believe that the school should not spend money on social activities to gain students. This is because this can ruin the true purpose of the school and if the school enhance their quality of education, the students will come in school without invest on social activities. To begin with, the school's invest on social activity can ruin the original goal of the school, 'education'. These days, many schools are attracting students through advertisement that tells they have a bunch of activities that can help them to get a job. However, in fact, the school is not a place to search a programs and social activities like volunteer work that can be a specification for jobs. The school is where people learn knowledge and study in one or a variety of fields. For instance, there was one survey conducted by a group of education major, with high school students as respondents. The purpose was to understand the consensus of the reason why their getting into the university. The most respondents answered that they go to university to get a job in the future. This was mainly because the number of schools are becoming to focus on practical activities rather than study. As the goal of the school is getting ruined, students are taking this situation more granted.
On top of that, to attract people, the school need to enhance their education skill rather than social activities. Even though the social activities can be beneficial for students in someday, however, it is the reputation of the school such as the rank surveyed by the department of education, not the social activities that the school offers, that makes the school attractive to the students. Therefore, the school need to improve their rank by enhance their quality of education. For example, there is one university near my home. The university is trying to get a lot of students by an ad that says they are offering a bunch of real-work experience. However, no one pay attention and believe their ad because the university has a bad reputation, even if it is true. Therefore, to attract a good student, the school should invest their money to enhance the quality of education.
To sum up, I think that the school's investment on social activities can ruin the true purpose of the school and if the school enhance their quality of education, the students will come in school without invest on social activities. In this regard, I disagree with the statement that in order to attract good students, the school should invest money on social activities.
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