■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : It is reasonable for athletes and entertainers to earn millions of dollars every years. |
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Some people believe that it is unfair to athletes and entertainer have excessive incomes relative their ability. However, I have a different idea of it. First of all, the influence which is they had on the world is very enormous. Secondly, they are experts in their own field.
To begin with, the athletes and entertainer can have a positive influence their own countries. Since there a lot of foreign fans of them who visit to see them, it's economic effects is very significant. For example, after my country's famous sports star, Yuna Kim won the gold medal in the Olympic, a lot of other countries in the world have interest in my country. Many people visit my country in order to see her game, also they suggested my country as the holding place for the next winter Olympic. Thanks to those fans efforts and passion, my country could hold an Olympic for the next time, it does not only make economic income but also provides my country with opportunity for introducing own's culture like an attraction, food and so on.
On top of that, they had a lot of efforts by themselves in order to become the experts in their field. Due to they always experience hard competition with their competitors, they have to spend much of money and time to develop their abilities. For instance, my brother has been playing baseball since when I was 12, In order to win the game and make high performances, I always practice 8 hours for a day. Also, spend twice as much money as the peers. He is the very famous pro-baseball player in my country thanks to the efforts that he made. Also, according to research from the University of Korea, after compared with the rate of economic success in own fields and average income of citizens, the sports player and entertainer showed most low results than other jobs, even the money they invested to success was much higher than others.
To sum up, sports player and entertainer can have an optimistic effect on their own country, also they made great efforts on their field in order to develop their performance.
In this regard, I agree that it is right that sports player and entertainer has very larger income than other jobs.