▶ Your Answer : There might be some people who believe that it is more important to provide a quiet room for study and provide space for entertainment. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for the two subsequent reasons. First, exercising can make students healthy. Second, they can expand their social networks by doing exercise. First of all, it can make students more healthy. What I mean is that they can make muscles by doing exercise such as tennis, soccer, and basketball. While doing these activities, they constantly run and jump. It can help them to make muscles, and I think those muscles are proof that we are strong. Let me bring up my personal story as an example. When I was in high school, I played basketball everyday. By jumping to put a ball, I realized that my legs became strong. Also, it improved my appetite, so I ate various food very much after doing basketball. It could make me healthy. Second, students can expand their social networks. This is because they can meet many new people by playing sports, and build close relationships with them. According to a recent survey done by JGR institute, 80 percent of the respondents said that the most important thing to expand social networks is playing sports together. This is because they can talk a lot, and join forces with many people while doing exercise. This clearly shows that sport is a good method to broaden their social networks. In conclusion, by doing exercise, students can be healthy, and expand their social networks. For these reasons, I strongly believe that schools should invest money on building an exercising room to improve students' life quality in dormitory. 저 궁금한 점이 있는데, 문단마다 띄어쓰기 해야하나요? 그러니까 첫단어 제일 앞이요!!! 그리고 제가 지금 한 것처럼 다음 단락 넘어갈때마다 한줄씩 띄어야 하나요? 또한, 글자수가 300자가 만약 넘지 않는다면 감점을 하는 건가요? 항상 정말 감사드립니다!!
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