예전에 본 시험에서 TWE가 2.5점 나와서 크게 실망했는데
벌써 시험이 다음주랍니다ㅜㅜ
오늘 쓴 건 여기 계신 님들께 어떤 평가를 받을 수 있을 지 궁금하네요..
시간은 50분 정도 걸린 것 같은데 분량이 그다지 많지 않아서 걱정이에요...
어떻게 하면 다른 분들처럼 예시도 풍부하게 들고 분량도 많이 채울 수 있을까요?
또 어떻게 하면 같은 단어를 중복되지 않게 할 수 있을까요?
제가 쓴 이 글에서도 보면 자꾸 parents와 children을 반복해서 쓰게 되더라구요.
대명사를 써도 어찌할 수 없다는....ㅜㅜ
제 글 평가와 함께 조언 한 마디라도 해 주시면 감사하겠습니다^^
주제 - 부모는 최고의 스승?
I agree with the statement that parents are the best teacher. Personally, I also believe that it is important for children to learn from their parents. There are two reasons for this. First, parents know about their children more than any other teachers. Second, parents have more love and devotion for their children.
By and large, parents know their children's lifestyles : acting and saying habit, communication, and interacting with other people. In other words, parents can teach their children easier and more comfortable, and children are familiar to their parents to be taught by them. Moreover, even the survey shows that 65 percent of children prefer parents than teachers.
And, the other reason is that parents love and give over to their children. By doing so, they can approach to their children as friends, and the relationship of them will be closer. Although their children are too foolish to understand something, they will wait for them no matter how long it takes.
Absolutely, I agree with the statement parents are the best teacher. Of course, there are a lot of details to consider, but I believe that there is no substitude for the love and devotion of one's parents. That is why I think parents are the best teacher.