▶ Your Answer :
According to the
reading passage, the Anasazi civilization abandoned their area because of a severe
drought. However, the points made in the reading is argues that the reason Ansazi abandoned
their spaces is a still controversy a controversial issue because the evidences are ambiguous. Most of all, the
article says that the bones from Anasazi graves display the malnutrition by a
severe drought. On the contrary, the speaker expresses doubt on this point by
asserting that malnutrition was a common phenomenon to Anasazi people of lower
class even without a severe drought. A lot of researchers asserts that 45% of their
children may be suffered the malnutrition even during harvest periods. Thus, the
event did not matter had no relationship with the severe drought. Besides, the
reading argues that the reason Ansazi abandoned their homeland is a strategy to
preserve their communities in response to the severe drought. This perspective
is challenged by the lecturer’s claim that if the reason was a strategy, it does not explain why
they did not return to their homeland. Therefore, we can know that the Anasazi
people did not abandoned because of the severe drought. The last point
made in the reading is that the Anasazi ended up resettling in spaces with
sufficient water. The lecturer, however, contradicts this point by asserting
that other regions lived them was also did not have sufficient water and
supplies. Now, Arizona, which is the region Anasazi people lived in, has a very
little moisture as well as and are the areas are not inappropriate to for agriculture. The
region is an in extremely harsh conditions. Hence, they were not abandoned their
region because of the severe drought.
예상점수 : 17~21 총평 : 문법적인 오류가 많습니다. 글을 쓰실 때 주어를 명확하게 써주시는 연습을 하셔야 할 것 같아요. 또한 어감상 어색한 표현들도 글에 많이 있습니다. 위에 글을 읽어보시고 그러한 부분들을 수정하시길 바래요. 내용적으로 봤을 때 요약도 잘해주셨고, 문단 구성도 잘 잡아주셨습니다. 수고 많으셨습니다.
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