▶ Your Answer : Some people think that news media is reliable source of unbiased information. However, in my opinion, news media doesn't does not always provide accurate information. There are two reasons why I maintain this view. for the following two subsequent reasons.
To begin with, not every journalism allow allows people balanced to balance perspective. There can be some media which do does not focus really important thing, such as human right problem. In my experience for instance, Korea underwent fire of president impeachment of president because of her personal interest pursue and overuse of government power. Some media didn't did not cover the issue actively even this case is really serious problem. Due to fear of government revenge. So many citizen spent lots of hard time on getting off her from president.
On top of that, some media intentionally cover covers fake news. Today, news become fast and large amount. Then the responsibility of journalism has been weaken weakened. Conversely, the profit which can be earned by fake news got bigger. For example, there was a poll conducted by Seoul Univ. with netizen who access news by internet as respondents. The purpose of the survey was to understand the consensus view about people's awareness, how much they are encroached by fake news. Surprisingly, the majority of respondents, 73% had responded that the some news which they access is involved in fake news, and this make them don't believe makes them do not trust the news. This survey proves that news became unreliable resources by fake news.
To sum up, news is not trustworthy enough, because they don't show people adequate views such as in politics. And there are lots of fake news. In this regard, news media lost its trust that they provide unbiased information. Good: 24~30 점수: 24 일단 문법적 오류들이 있습니다. 제가 첨삭한 부부을 보시고 숙지하시길 바랍니다. 독립형 에세이에 있어서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 본인의 에세이를 통하여서 상대방을 설득 할 수 있냐 인데. 지금 이 에세이는 문법적인 오류로 인하여서 이러한 부분에 있어서 많은 부족함이 보인느 거 같습니다. 문법적 오류들을 항상 주의하시면서 에세이를 서술하시길 바랍니다. 이러한 부분들을 숙지하시면서 에세이를 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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