■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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There is not doubt that parents are devoted to thier kids and can be best teacher because they know their kids best. However, this does not mean that parents are the most significant influence on a child's success in school. I strongly believe that classmates are most influencial in a child's school life because children spend much time with classmates and can learn from them and they can inpire a child's socialization.
First of all, children spend most of their time with their classmates. After their kids enter school, parents spend less time with their kids and it is difficult for parents to check out what their kids do during a day in school. This means that parents do not know exactly what happens in school and they cannot share many things about school life with their children. In contrast, children always stay with his or her classmates in school, which means that they interact with and influence on each other all the time in school.
It is also important to consider that students learn from their classmates. Classmates can be teachers as well as friends to a child. They often perform team acitivities and during these works, they share their ideas and information about studying. Moreover, students can ask other classmates questions because they are more available than teachers and students feel more comfortable than asking teachers. It also happens that studnets are asked questions from classmates. Through these interactions with their classmates, studnets can make more solid knowledge.
Another sigificant role of classmates is that they can inspire a child's socialization. Socialization is an essentail step for childen to grow as mature adults and successful socialization is necessary for a child's success in school. Classmates are considerble part of socialization. A child can learn how to make friends and how to establish intimate relationships with other people. Classmates also can give advice when a child is in trouble. Through this process, a child can improve their social abilities.
In conclusion, a child spend most of time with classmates and can learn from each other. Also, classmates play a significant role in a child's socialization. There is no doubt that solid kwowledge and smooth socialization is requisite for successful school life. Therefore, I frimly believe that classmates are the most significant influence on a child's success in school. | |
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