■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :95. Today’s parents’ do not understand their children as much as they did in the 50’s. | |
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As todays' society has developed, most parents have more hectic schedules to survive with their family rather than before. Therefore, I agree with this statement above for the following reasons. First, Today's parents do not have enough time to understand their children. Moreover, there is not the factor to feel the similarity between parents and their children.
First, due to the busy schedule in todays' society, most parents do not have leisure time to take a rest and to be with their children. These days, they also face fierce competition;and thus have to spend most of their time ar work. The problem with this is that it may late the time which parents returing their home because their hectic schedules at office. also parents also nsufficient to feel or to relate with their children than the past. Therefore, today's parents may hard to understand their children rather than before.
To be specific, my parents - Father and Mother - work together all day long for their children's future. Thus, our family do not have enough time to communicate with each other and sometime,
my parents do not understand me and my sister's school life. | |
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