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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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One encounters a large number of moment to make a decision. Some people think it is important to make a decision choice alone in order to develop the sense of independence and responsibility. However, I strongly agree with the idea that a person should not make an important decision reach draw a conclusion alone based on three reasons.
First of all, other people can provide different points of view and information which one does not grasp.facing same situations. Different people have different ways of thinking and perspectives while percieving the same problems. It is possible that people have a look at consider only one side of certain situation when before making a decision alone. However, various points of view can help one understand the problem as a whole. On the contrary Also, while listening to other people's opinions, people can find out some points which they missed. Also, there is always some possibility to make a wrong decision by misunderstanding information. Other people can point out the wrong aspects of one's arguements and confirm the right alternative.
It is also an important fact to consider that people do not live alone. In the society, people need to cooperate and are related to each other in any aspect. This implies that even though a problem looks very private, one's decision can affect other people's work and an important decision even can change their lives. For example, one needs to talk with his or her boss before quitting a job which looks personal. Because It is because that his or her coworkers have to take over the residual tasks adn and the boss has to rearrange the work. Therefore, one has to have a discussion with other people before making an important decision.
Also, one can receive mental or emotional support from other preople after reaching to conformity the concurrence in opinion. Sometimes it is only one person who makes a decision and whoes life is affected by that decision. However, it is still considerable to talk with other people because they can support the one by heart after they agree with his or her decision. On the contrary, it is difficult for them to support seriously if they do not understand his or her choice. These mental support is critical to keep doing certain tasks especially when encountering troubles.
To sum up with. I firmly believe that one should not make an important decision alone because other people can provide various solutions and the decision can affect other people. Also, through discussion before a decision, one can get mental support from other people. | |
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