■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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The ability to cooperate is more important than the past. | |
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People have various ideas on the cooperation in the modern days. Some people may argue that the cooperating ability has become more important nowadays compared to the past. However, I have a different idea. When it comes to the statement that the ability to cooperate is more important than the past, I have to agree with it because in modern days, the countries in the world cannot live without cooperation and this ability is necessary in corporations.
First of all, cooperation is essential for nations in this world. In other words, with the reason that each countries in the world have different important resources, in order to use the resources in other countries, the nations have to cooperate to trade. Also, in the past, not many technologies were not developed, so the environmental problems were not serious. However, with the advent of many technology, the environmental problems have become extremely important nowadays such as air pollution and global warming. In order to prevent the problems, all countries have to cooperate. For instance, many countries regulated the day which people can drive their own cars according to their car numbers to reduce the air pollution. Also, many nations developed alternative energy resources that can be used for reducing using fossil fuels which facilitate the global warming. Therefore, it can be said that cooperating is more necessary today.
Moreover, corporations need the ability to cooperate to prosper today. Put it differently, there were many small companies that do not require the complex employment system in the past. In those companies, there were only small number of workers, and the department system was not very developed, so the cooperation with small number of employees were enough to develop the company. However, nowadays, there are a number of corporations that consist of an abundance of workers and the department system. In corporations, there are lots of departments, and these departments make a successful corporation with their cooperation. Accordingly, cooperating is very important recently compared to the past.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that the coordinating ability is more impotant now than in the past because it is significant for all countries to live together in the recent society. Also, this is the most important factor to be successful for corporations. Cooperation might be more important in the future.
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