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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Students should take courses that interest them rather than courses that will prepare them for a particular career. | |
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It is often said that it is better for students to take subjects they are interested in because it encourages students to find their aptitudes and actively participate in classes. However, I strongly believe that students should choose to take courses that will be helpful for the future career for two reasons: in order to be successful in their jobs and save their time and money.
To begin with, taking courses related to a particular career plays a significant role in getting a job and achieving one’s goal. Although students are able to figure out what they are really interested in by taking a variety of subjects, it would not enough to contribute to students’ successful lives. Thus, students should take practical courses to develop essential skills and prepare for their future career. For example, one of my friends, who wanted to become a fashion designer, took an introductory course in computer skills to learn how to use computer program as a design tool. Even though her hobby was listening to classical music, she gave up taking a music class to develop such an important skill for her career. As a result, she was able to master the use of the computer program and became a confident fashion designer due to the specialized effort. -gud example
In addition, choosing specific courses for a particular career helps students to save their time and money. It is obvious that students can accomplish their goals quicker(quickly) if they prepare for their career as soon as possible. Moreover, taking practical courses enables students to save money as well as time, since the tuition is determined by the number of classes they take. Therefore, students who take courses related to their career will move to the next stage of their lives in shorter time period with less amount of money. For instance, I could graduate the university only in four years and got a job that I have wanted because I took courses which were connected to my major. On the other hand, my friend who enjoyed various subjects which he was interested in was not able to fulfill the requirement for graduation until now. (until now를 쓰는것보다 more specific하게 써주는것도 좋을것 같네요)
In brief, it is better for students to take courses that help the preparation for a particular career rather than those courses that are interesting, since students can achieve their goals not only successfully, but also economically. All in all, we need to remember the fact that students should always have the ability to prioritize everything to live a successful life.
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