■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :It is better to live in one city or town tha more from one place to another | |
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It is often said that living in a city or town is better for people because it provides more comfortable and stability. However, I believe that moving many different places is beneficial for two reasons: people can reduce cultural prejudice and learn valuable traits for future career.
To begin with, one can broaden their view by living different places. It is obvious that being exposed to different cultures, diverse lifestyle, and customs enables people to embrace diffenrent people and cultures. Thus, one can make different friends with unique background, which contributes to reduce their prejudice. For example, when I was fifth grade, there was a Ethiopian girl in my class ans she brought her hoom-cooked meals for lunch. She ate it with her hands without using ustensile and other students who had never seen such a thing kept their distance from her. On the other hand, I felt comfortable because I had visited Africa and experienced a such sistuation.
In addition, living many different places teaches people valuable things for future career. This is because values such as independence, reposibility, and apatability can be obtained from throwing oneself out of different places and cultures. In the modern society, job market want to hire employees with a variety of experiences and qualities. According to the Ministry of Labor of Korea in 2007, job corporations’ preference has been changing: from prestigious school names to a wide range of experiences and broad perspective. Also, these factors took up more than 80 percent of empolyment qualification. This implies that employers believe that employees having different view and values can perform their work more productivitly.
In brief, living in many different places is more important than staying one places because people can reduce their cultural prejudice and learn valuable traits for future career. All in all, moving around the world has positive impact on people to grow up themselves.
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