■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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First impressions tell a lot about people. | |
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As far as I can remember, people have been debating that first impressions tell a lot about people. From my point of view, I firmly feel that it is not true all the time because three reasons which I will explain now.
First of all, everyone may have a different way of treating new people. There are two big kinds of methods of treating new people. First, some people are so sociable that they can talk about themselves with new people easily, but others who are very shy and somewhat unsociable try not to talk much and hide themselves in some ways which makes new people prefer friendly ones to unfriendly ones. It is , however, not always true. Because it is just differences between sociable and unsociable personalities.
Secondly, initial impressions change over time. In my case, most of my friends told me that they thought I did not talk much and was not funny when they met me for the first time. But after several our hanging out together, they told me totally differently than before. They said I was so funny and a talkative guy. I think I talk and share only with people who are familiar with me. That is why I insist first impressions changes over time.
Lastly, physical appearances affect a lot on first impressions. It is obvious and natural that a good-looking person may get a better impression than a little bit bad-looking one does. Despite of this fact, we should not discriminate people by their appearances. We are all aware that is absolutely unfair. Everyone has their own appearances and traits. Of course, they must be respected equally.
To sum up, everyone may have a different view of this issue. However, I firmly disagree with the statement that first impressions show a lot about people. As I mentioned above, we need to take some time to get to know new people and respect them without any prejudice. Moreover, physical appearances are not the only ones we need to know who new person is.
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