■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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Some Famous athletes and entertainers earn million of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. | |
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Some people don't think that some famous athletes and entertainers deserve to earn million of dollars every year. They might think that they earn too much money comparing the other people who are working at their companied so hard. However, I think that famous athletes and entertainers deserve to earn a lot of money for two reason. I think that their effort to be those positions and their power let them deserve to earn such money.
First of all, I think that their effort to be those positions is very tougher than the other who are working at company. Let me take Park Ji Sung for a example. Park is the player on Manchester United that is one of the famous soccer team in the world. Before entering this team, Park had so hard time because of his short heights. Even he couldn't enter a good university as university coachs ingored his abilitiy. However, he didn't give up even exercise more. I totally believe that his effort to be one of the top player make him as he desired. the other athletes and entertainers who are famous all around the world muse have hard time to be their positions. So I think that they deserve to earn a lot of money.
Most of time, people are interested in famous athletes and entertainers. If my favorite athletes win a game, I feel so happy. And entertainers usually make people release their stress so people watch them when they get stressed. It means, famous athletes and entertainers have power. According their behavior, their fashion, their announcement or their attitude, people are likely change themselves. It is natural that people who have power earn a lot of money and get reputation. This fact is resultd in their effort that I have mentioned above it. So I think that they can get money from people who are affected by them.
To sum up, everyone may have different view of this subject. However, as I believe that people can get everything as much as they make effort, I think that famous athletes and entertainers deserve to get whatever they are able to. I agree that a lot of people who live 'normal life' feel jealous of them. But when we do our best, we are also able to have whatever we want. | |
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