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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :선생님의 페이는 학생의 성적에 따라 줘야한다 | |
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Measuring teachers’ wage is sometimes controversial because of absence of its exact standard. Some people might argue that it is unfair to offer payment by students’ GPA, since grade is the ambiguous standard in evaluating wage. However, in my opinion, it definitely advantage to provide payment measured by students’ score in terms of improving education’s quality. There are two reasons to support this main idea: in order to obtain chance to promote teachers and focus on priority to students. (to put priority on students?)
To begin with, students can benefit from different payment to teachers because of motivating(because it motivates) teachers. Economic stimulus is very effective way to provoke teacher to concentrate on education. In order to get a higher wage more profits (여기서 profit은..뭐 팔고남은 profit이럴땐 괜찮은데..),a teacher would struggle in trying to improve students’ ability. For example, when our school adopted incentive institution, my mathematic teacher changed his method of teaching to instruct easily( instructions that can be understood easily). He used many tools in order to explain Pythagorean theory. Thanks to his effort, students in my class could get enhanced score, and the teacher could achieve his goal, increased payment.his salary
On top of that, students’ grade is the most significant factor in for both teachers and students. Since the primary role of a teacher is to aid students to get good scores in taking good score for their successful future, it is reasonable to regard students’ grade as a measurement to decide payment. For instance, my friend went to school which considered chant contest as important. Teacher assuminged my friends’ class forceed students to practice very hard, since school would award profitable prize, if they won. Although they finally won the contest and received the prize, my friend regretted to waste so much time into chant practive instead of studies,leading to failure to enter university. because of fail to enter the university with most classmates. As a result, the teacher was got punished from the school for his lack of responsibility and determination for his students and its class atmosphere.to disrupt students’ class atmosphere. Therefore, motivation related with score is crucial for students’ future success.
To summarize, I strongly believe that producing different payment from student’s grade leads to positive results, not only stirring teacher to help students more efficiently but also realizing the importance of study. Thus, I recommend that it is necessary for schools to seriously enter the payment policy.
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지나쳐버렸었군요 ㅋㅋㅋ
급하게 마음먹지 마시구요 ㅋ
종종 맞지않는 단어들을 쓰셨는데 그것 유의하시구요
그래머도 주의하시구,
뭐 그런내용도 쓰면 좋았을텐데,
열심히 가르켜서 학생들점수도 잘 받고 하게 하는 선생님이랑
그냥 농땡이까면서 신경도 안쓰고 실력도 없는 선생님이랑
구별할수있는 좋은 시스템이다..뭐 이런거 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
뭐 선생님들에게 조금의 스트레스와 부담감을 껴안아줄수도있겠지만
학생들은 더 좋은 교육과 도움을 선생님들은 더 높은 월급을 받을수 있는 기회를 얻을수 있다.
뭐 이런거?ㅋㅋㅋ쌓인게 많았는지 이야기가 술술나오네요 ㅋㅋㅋ
에니웨이, 굳렄.