■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :University athletic departments should receive the same amount of funding as university librarians.
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These days, a growing number of people believe that University athletic departments should receive the same amount of funding as university librarians. Similarly, I strongly believe that University athletic departments should be supported the same amount of money as university librarians. The rationale behind this is that great athletes who will make their nations known to other people are cultivated their talent in the university. Moreover, in these days, sports competitions like World Cup and Olympic is spotlighted in the world.
First of all, sports players who can represent their nations are fostered their skills and physical strength in university. Therefore, universities should support athletic departments as same as librarians. For example, many scientists and literary men let other nations' people know Korea. However, many athletes such as Park Ji-sung and Park Chan-ho make Korea become known to worldwide, too. They did their major in high school and university. Not only with their effort, but also with university's supporting, they could finally be nation amateur who raise Korea's name. If it had not been for university's funding support, they would have not been able to lift Korea's power.
Moreover, many people give attention to international sports tournament. It is important to inform a country in world competition. Consequently, athletes need active support to their departments. The best example of this is World Cup in 2002. In 2002, there was World Cup in Korean and Japan. In this tournament, Korea team ranks among the top four. AS the result of this competition, Korea became very famous and many people from other country visit Korea. So Korea gets a lot of money from foreigners' tour fee. On the other hand, there is no literature competition that people pay attention except Novel Prize. So there are not many ways to make the nation powerful by literature. In this respect, university should support athletic departments as same as librarians.
In conclusion, with unswerving conviction, I agree with the opinion that University athletic departments should receive the same amount of funding as university librarians. The reasons are that university athletic departments can train athletes who can represent the nation and it is a good chance to let others know their country through the international sports tournament. All in all, I believe that supporting athletic departments is necessary. In other words, great athletes who can represent the nation can be trained in university with active support. | |
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