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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Advertisement is a waste of a company's time and money because most consumer know what they want to buy. | |
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뭘 주장할때는 might/maybe는 잘안쓰시는게 낫지않을까요;
확실치않을때 주로 쓰이니까요;
There might are different ideas regarding whether advertisement is a waste of a company's profit since most consumers know what they want to buy without any help of advertisements. Personally, I do not agree with the above statement because advertisement not only make people give an impulse to people to purchase purchasing but also enhance company's images.
To begin with, advertisement is beneficial for company in terms of bringing about impulsive purchasing. In today's society, a significant number of people are flooded with a considerable amount of advertisement. (there are a considerable amount of advertisement flooding..) Even though people do not seem to be affected by those a lot of advertisements, in reality, people are somewhat charmed by receiving/contacting with shown showing image or sound from advertisement. (또는, Shown images or sounds from advertisements charm people with its great accessibility..)Thus, these are caused make people to buy many items what they saw from the
commercial even though they do not really need them. According to the research released by Korean National Center, more than two third of the surveyed consumers mentioned that they tend to get many unnecessary items without thinking(any thought) after watching advertisement. This is because of the magnificent sound effect or visual impact from commercial. Consumers are facinated from these facts and it make people impusive purchasing.
Moreover, advertisement help company to enhance their images. In general, company's impression or image plays key roles in thier success. Of course, other facts such as quality of the items is are also siginificant. However, focusing solely on item's quality is not enough in this competitive society. In this sense, the image of the brand name is becoming the most important factor among others. Take my case as an example. When I went shopping for grocery, there were variety of items with same condition and similar functions. At this point, I chose one which I had seen from TV commercial. Because those commercials showed that their fresh and clean policy, so I had great impression on the brand that I took and I picked the one without any hesitation. If I had not seen the commercial, I would have not buy the item. In this regard, advertisement plays crucial role in terms of having good image which will bring about a amount of profits.
그래머가 좀 약하시군요,
그리고 토플에세이인가요?
그럼 콩쿨루젼은 넣으셔야겠죠?
그리고 더욱더 토픽이랑 이어서 에세이를 이끌어가시는연습도 필요하겠네요
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