■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Television 이 재미가 아닌 교육을 목적으로 쓰여야 한다 에 동의하냐 동의하지 않느냐 | |
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Television was thought of as expensive commodity in the past. However, as a lot of technologies have developed dramatically, it has been widespread in the world. In this sense, a lot of controversy exists over whether it should be used for education or not. While some people disagree with the idea, I strongly believe that it should be used for education since it is one of the most prevalent things and many students spend a lot of time watching it.
To start with, today most homes possess television. This means that most homes can benefit from the television without more cost. Students do not need to go to school and can take courses in the comfort of their homes. Moreover, this educational effect will considerably reduce the cost of individual education. Especially those without enough money to go to other academic facilities will benefit from this. To illustrate this point, according to the study recently release by Seoul National University in Korea, the number of family that have television account for 90 percent of all families in Korea. Not only that, it mentioned that the rate of increasing education cost is enormous. This study suggested that television would be most effective way to relief the burden of education cost.
On top of that, most students merely spend a lot of time being glued to television. This is because television is rather addictive to students. Even though they do not gain actual and useful things from it, they just spend a great part of their time watching it for just fun. If many programs are replaced to educational matters, they would gain a lot of educational and helpful lessons for their study. For example, my older brother used to spend half a day watching the television and did not care for his homework. His transcript showed that he had a low probability of pursuing higher education as a result of his lifestyle. However, as my mother suggested, he started to watch education channel and his score begin to become better. At last, he could get high score in his school and enter a college.
In conclusion, because television is very common and most students tend to spend considerable time watching it, I firmly believe that if television is used for education, it would be much more beneficial than now. Even though, the other role of television are various and important, people should not underestimate the educational effect. | |
헤헤 시험이 얼마 남지 않아서 자주 올리는데
어드미션님께서 자주 봐주셔서 많은 도움이 되네요^^ 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ