As far as I remember, people have been debating why people go to college or university. Probably, everyone has a different reason for that. Anyway I think that going to college makes people smarter than before they have learnt, and people want to get a high degree or salary. There are some instances to support these reasons.
First and foremost, as we know, people learn much more materials or knowledge from college or university. Some may want to learn more than high school, and other may need to learn college course. In our community, a high education is more necessary than before. As we go to the college, it provides us much more information and knowledge so that we can promote our lives or our minds. For instance, we learn specific information which is known as society, community, or biology. Of course, we have already leant from our high school, but that was just basic knowledge or education. In this period, people need to be smart and clever since everyone around us can be our rivals.
왜 현대사회가 예전보다 높은 수준의 지식을 요구하는지에 대해서 써줄 필요가 있겠네요~
Last but not least, college or university is a good way to make our lives higher. This means that people want to get a high degree (사회적 지위를 말하는건가요? status ) in the society, and want to get a high salary. As I have mentioned the examples above, after graduating from the college, they go toward the real world. They need to support their lives or need to save money for their future. Perhaps, it can be a prime reason that they want to earn a high position and salary, and also this can cause most people today attend college or university.
본문 2는 많이 짧네요 ^^ ;
전개하는 문장을 좀 더 쓰고 예시도 충분히 길게써주세요~~
In conclusion, although everyone may hold a different reason on this issue, I personally think that there are two reasons among bunch or reasons. One, people want to smart or need to learn more about education. Two, they want to get a high position so that they can get a high salary in society.
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