■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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It is often said that technology has made people's lives simpler compared to the past. Some people maybe opposed to this idea since some thoughtless people disturb other people in public places by using cell phons loudly. However, from my point of view, technology has definitely improved the way people live by saving their time and making more accomodities accessible.
To begin with, due to development in technology, people enjoy more relexable life styles. Nowadays, machines replace the role of human bing in many places. Not only are they more accurate, but also they finish work faster with extremely few mistakes. This change allowes people to enjoy their free time while robots do their work instead. To take an example, in the past, people had to go to a stream to wash their clothes. Because there was no exception even in winter, doing laundery was such a annoying task. On the contrary, people in the 21st century do not need to walk long way to find a place to do their launderies. All they have to do is push a button on the washing machine in the comfort of their home. In about ten minutes, launderies get finished and people can see clean clothes.
Moreover, it is easier to get products than it used to be. One of the most significant inventions of human bing is airplane. It enables people to go to ather continent within merely several hours. In addition, tons of products are exported from one nation to another thanks to airplanes. As a consequence, people get what they want with greater ease whenever and wherever they want. The typical example of this is internet shopping. Thanks to wide distribution of computer, almost every people has access to internet and easily make a purchase through various types of web sites. People don't need to even go outside their home and buy products which are manufactured in nations more than milions of miles away with a single click of a mouse.
To sum up, technological improvements have absolutely contributed to making lives simpler. They help people work less time and enjoy more spare time, and enable people to gain accomodities more easily. On the whole, although it is true that technologies have also brought about inconvenience and made life a little bit more complicated than it used to be, the advantages of technologies evidently far outweigh those of disadvantages. | |
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