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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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Topic : 해커스 Writing 정규 책 122p HT1 내용입니다. | |
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The lecture disagrees with the benefits of sending expatriates abroad casting doubts on the advantagaes the writing passage claims.
처음에 이런걸 설명하기 이전에, in the reading passage,..뭐 이런식으로 시작하는게 낫겠죠,
뤼딩에있는 argument를 여기다가 다시 전달하는 식이니까요,
First of all, people who is are sent out to a foreign country are not familiar with local languages and customs. Thus, they are likely to wast much time on the simple tasks working in there. In addition, expatriates seem to be not loyal to the companies even if the companies invest a lot to them. 이런건 좋아요 >>This rebutes the writing passage's argument that expatriates work efficiently because they do not need any trainings about the company's expectations or in language and set the company's interests as the first priority.
Futermore, the lecturer says that the employess on assignments abroad does not satisfied with their situation and are easily frustrated although the company offer them higher salaries and unique opportunities. Because they face lots of unexpected circumstances while working in unfamiliar areas and feel uncomfortable with foreign languages. Moreover, the education on their kids is not enough in foreign countries compared to the one in their home countries. This contradicts the writing passage's claim that the company can expect higher production stimulated by employees given lots of salaries and opportunities to travel in the region of their forein office.
시간이된다면 한줄이라도 콩쿨루젼써주는것도 괜찮죠 (시간남을때) | |
통합형은 대체로, 뤼딩이랑 리스닝 둘다 해서 롸이링 쓰는거죠?
우선 대충 structure만 봐드릴께요
example이라 support가 뤼딩이랑 리스닝에서 2개면 2문단으로 해서 쓰신대로 하시면 되구요,
3개면 3개로,
reading passage랑 listening의 의견이 분명히 나타날수있게, 저 파란줄로 친거처럼..저런걸로
정리해주면 좋구요,
이런건 정보가 제일 우선이되어야겟죠,
얼마나 정확한 정보를 받아서 정리해서 쓰느냐,
노튼테이킹하실때 되도록이면 많은 정보를 이해하면서 들으시면서 하시구,
쓰실때 아무래도 매끄럽게 뤼딩이랑 리스닝이랑 이어서 잘 쓰시면 되겠네요 ^^
gud luck