우선 이곳이 서로 피드백을 하는 공간이지 잘하는 사람이 잘 못하는 사람을 가르치는 공간이 아니라는 점을 전제로 하고 주제 넘게 몇자 적어 보겠습니다 ^^
제 소견으로는 더 훌륭하게 딱 들어맞는 단어가 아니라면 쉬울수록 좋다고 믿습니다(온니 제생각)
문법이 약해서 꼭 찝어 여기는 이래서 틀렸다고 말씀은 못드리고요 그냥 좀 더 자연스럽게 바꿔볼 께요
Bike would be the most strange transportation for urban people. It is uncommon to travel about 64km with the bike. It consumes a lot of energy and time until the destination, but there are good phases where we can look at. I have traveled 150km with the bike, it took about 3 days. so 64km would take a day to arrive, compare with the car and the train, it is the slowest transportation. But the good things are we can enjoy the enviroment through out the journey and breath fresh air what we could not enjoy in the urban society. We can get calmness and health back. I can catch two birds with a stone.
Taking a bike would be the hardest way to reach to the destination that we have to run 64km. It takes a lot out of us such as time and energy until we arrive to the place. However, if we look at the downside of the travel, there are good advantages as well. I guess that the bicycle trip for 64km takes all day long to arrive. A Bike is the slowest vehicle relatively with a car and a train. However, there must be many joyful things. During the journey, we enjoy beautiful views around us, and it makes us refresh our minds by breathing fresh air that we cannot feel in urban areas. Beside, it is good for our health. It is what catching two birds with only one stone is.
I talked about the most common transportation, the fastest transportation, and the slowest. Everything what I choose had they own advantages and disadvantages. Now it is matter of what I choose. I will reflect my options which I suggested and will choose it!
There are pretty common vehicles I mentioned, but each transportation way has both advantages and disadvantages as well. 이 뒤로는 어떻게 바꿔야 될 지 잘 감이 안오네요 걍 써봤습니다
If I have to choose only one option to travel, I would choose a bike because of refreshing my mind and being healthy.