■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Euthanasia (안락사) shoud be legalized? | |
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Euthanasia has been a big issue in the world. Most nations do not permit euthanasia legally yet even there are many upholders want it be legalized. A few countries allow euthanasia passively because of the abuse possibility of euthanasia. Besides, there is an ethical question. Some say, “Euthanasia is morally wrong.” Although these opposite opinions are persuasive, euthanasia should be legalized because of relieving pain of terminal patients, saving expense for the families, and the right of graceful death.
Euthanasia would be only one way to relieve extreme pains of the patients who are suffering from mortal diseases. Incurable illness entails extreme pain until it kills the patients. Let us try to imagine that we have to decide either way, if our families suffer the fatal diseases and have to endure the serious pain until they die. Even your sister or brother asks you to die everyday rather than delaying their lives on beds. It will be hard enough to ignore or neglect their request whatever it takes. I may choose mercy killing even it is an unnatural way to die. It is an inevitable choice. It brings about not only their suffering by physical pain, but also the patients get psychological depression by feeling guiltiness because their families should keep the eyesight on them around the clock. It is another extreme mental pain to the patients. Moreover, perhaps, the patients regard it is meaningless to prolong their terms on beds until their death.
Euthanasia relives the economical burden of the families who have fatal patients from hospital charges. As staying period goes further in a hospital, the patients are inflicted expensive costs, and their families often get serious economical problems. Probably, the families and the patients want to spend their money as long as the patients could get over, but the patients finally will die. Their families are even more serious because of losing their family members and the huge expenses from hospitals.
Human being has a right to get a graceful death. The patients lose their natural appearances such as hair, skin, etc., when they are close to death. Definitely, both the patients and the families want to remember each other nicely. In other words, the patients do not want to show their changed appearances. Legalized euthanasia grants not only a right of graceful death but also it makes the patients and their families prepare their minds before the death. They can get a time to arrange minds and relationships, and it reduces sadness about the death by preparing. In addition, their families could be with their family members when they face the death. Probably, nobody wants to die with extreme pain. Euthanasia might be the last way for a comfortable death even it is an unnatural way to die.
Some define euthanasia is another name of murder. However, we should tolerate the incurable people can choose to finish their lives. Euthanasia is the last liberation from the patients’ extreme pain and numerous financial bothering and then they would relive from the every painful memories by facing with calm and graceful death. | |
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