■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice. | |
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In Korea, the ratios of business owners to total population is more than 3 times comparing to in EU. Many people think they can make more profit and they can be free from many limitations if they own a business. However, I prefer to work for an employer because I cannot endure the mental stresses and i can make stable incomes through my job.
First of all, owners have to take responsibilties to manage their own businesses. The survival of companies are dependent on their decisions. Also, owners have to take care of all employees of their companies. It often happens that some big companies go down and workers lose their jobs because of wrong choices of owners. For example, General motors, the largest automobile company in USA, finally went bankrupt because the owner did not manage the business well when confronting economic cirsis. Therefore, many owners are under severe mental stresses. It is true that employees also are under many kinds of stress. However, the severity of the stress is less for employees because they do not need to take responsiblities over other workers. I do not want to suffer from stress and I choose to work as an employee to avoid it.
Also, I can have stable incomes when I work for a company. Owners of businesses cannot make fixed amount of money because they cannot anticipate the amount of money they can make for a month exactly. Also, generally speaking owners of small businesses often give up their works because of lack of established systems or know-hows. In contrast, employees can earn fixed amount of money for a month and it is easy for them to make financial plans in the long perspective. Besides, people have some illusions that they can make more money if they have their own businesses. The truth is that people may make more money if they improve their abilities which are necessary for companies. For example, many executive officers of big companies do work for companies but the amount of their salaries can be more than salaries of owners of small companies.
In conclusion, I prefer to work for a companies because owning a business is such a stressful responsibilty and people can make more stable and even more amount of income comparing to when people own a business. | |
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