포기하시지 마시고 후딱 끝내버리세요 화이팅 !ㅋㅋ 복잡하게 쓰시지 마시고 영어로 생각해서 간단히
쓸수있는 연습을 하시는게 좋을것 같습뉘다. 아 industry 에 근면이라는 뜻이 있었군요; 근데 잘 안쓰지 않을까요; ㅋㅋ(아닌가..)
그냥 간단하게쓰죠?ㅋ Money can't determine any success in our lives. If the standard of success is determined by how much money people have, it can not be said the characteristic to be successful in life. In terms of personal characteristics, I think that the most important characteristic to succeed is industry which means the tendancy to be dilligent with ceaseless trial. It is very helpful and influencial to be successful in life because of some reasons. Out of them, by giving two examples, I can mention why I think so. 말할 두가지이유를 간단히 여기다가 쓰시는게 좋을것 같네요^^
To be begin with, continuel trial is the best way to acheive the dreams or goals. There is the famous saying; No pain, no gain. It means that people have to strive to obtain what they want if they want to be successful.(It means that there is no success/accomplishment without effort or failure/hardhip) For example, Mr. Lee who is , the president of Republic of Korea is representative to be successful thanks to indutry. < one of people who succeed through lots of hardship and effort. When he was young, his family was poor so that it was impossible for him to receive any inheritance from his parents. (여기서 가난해서 유산을 못받았다는 내용보다 뭐 교육을 잘 못받았던지, 잘 못먹었다던지 그런내용을 쓰는게 더 나을듯 싶네요) He dicided to be rich and successful. According to the testmonies of people who had studtied and worked with him, he was always dilligent both at the school and at the company. As the a result, he became the CEO of Hyundai bridge company, and now he is the president of my country, Korea. There are no one who can say that he is not successful.
Moreover, industry is one of the ways to gain trust from others. When we see someone who does his best and is dilligent, it is possible easy for us to evaluate that he is a believable person( it is easy for us to trust him). Because people can not live alone, so they sometimes need help or favor of from others. However, if someone who lose credit/faith from others, lost the trust, the others might be reluctant to hear do his favor.(>>People are reluctanct to help someone who is unreliable/incredible. ) It can be an obstacle to be successful.< Credibility is one of important characteristics to succeed. When I was a high school student, one of my friends lost his trust from a teacher becasue he was often absent in the classes without any notices. When he asked a teacher to write recommendation form for application of university, a teacher rejected the favor of my friend. so that he could not go to a good university. The absense of good recommndation form affected his preparation for universities badly. If he gain the trust from a teacher through industry, he could go to a better university, furthermore he has could have more opportunity to get a good job.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that industry or dilligence is the most important characteristic to be successful. When it comes to a good consequence of efforts and others' helps through the trust, industry can play the significant role to acheive the success. Dilligence always bring great consequences with more opportunity to be successful in life. Thus, keeping industry industry/dilligence/ is an important factor and personal characteristic to lead our life successful. |