Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Recently, many people take easy food eat fast foods. Most marts markets also have much kind a variety of easy fast foods to eat and to prepare. Some people prefer the foods, but my opinion is the food doesn’t improve our live that the change has not improved the way we live for several reasons.
First, the easy foods are not good for our health. Most people eating easy food are high weight(calories) . Other foods need much kind of items(what?). However, the easy food doesn’t need other products(what?), so they trying easy food don’t have to do extra work for cook. >>doesn't make sense.. "it's less time consuming to have a fast food meal. ..." Because the foods are very easy to prepare, people more often eat. The foods are made so that all people can feel good taste. Anyone doesn’t have to eat salt so much, and some people have to eat little sugar. On the other hand, the easy foods can’t match to each person’s health. 그래머가ㅠㅠ
Secondly, when we eat the foods, we can’t enjoy community life in family. If we eat some foods by cook, we could cook together and enjoy by help each other. At that time, we can feel happiness about love of family. For example, in my country, we often cook with family members. We make special food at holly day(on holidays). Especially, we make ‘MANDU’ together at New Year day and make ‘RICECAKE’ at CUSUCK day. I always feel peace and happiness in family. Cooker isn’t just mother. When we cook together, we can have conversation happily with family. and have smile with family.
In conclusion, the easy foods aren’t matches our each situation of health, so the food isn’t good for our health. Also if we eat the easy food, the time having together family member would decreases. For these reasons, I think that the easy foods don’t improve the way people live.
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